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Monday, April 1, 2019

How pollution affects the ocean and its animals


This is the slide show was made by Nevaeh,Milly and Me.
It is about how pollution effects the ocean.
I hope you enjoy


3 comments:

  1. Hi joanna!
    You commented on my animation, and asked me to comment on your blog!
    First of all, thank you for commenting!
    I was shocked at how many sea animals die because of US!
    our rubbish.
    Its obvious that you worked super hard on this!
    Its great you remembered a walt, but maybe next time add a reflection. What you liked, what you could work on, E.G
    Keep posting, and commenting.
    I am now very aware of what a little piece of plastic can do, and will try to do everything in my power to stop pollution.
    Bye!

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  3. Well done! The three have of you have really made the most of your time. There is a lot of well-researched, relevant information in here. I really like your use of heading slides to break up the key ideas into groups. The visuals complement the text well and the text itself is easy to read. Make sure you are really critical with your proof reading.

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